The poem is really good… really…
Title? Well I have ideas but they don’t seem to do your work justice – besides, aren’t you best qualified to be the one to create the title that goes with your created poem? (I think so)
Hi. I really liked hearing your poem. I especially like the line about the sheep saying the wolves dance for them. You have a natural cadence to your voice and it shows the internal rhythm of the poem. I look forward to seeing your next video. Jane
Beautifully detailed comment, i thank you! I sometimes hear myself over and over and I notice a natural cadence to my voice as well, even when I try to change it up a bit, depending on the poem. But I guess its my signature cadence! :-p I’m learning to accept it, and you just made it easier. Thank you so much! I’m humbled
December 27, 2012 at 5:01 pm
The poem is really good… really…
Title? Well I have ideas but they don’t seem to do your work justice – besides, aren’t you best qualified to be the one to create the title that goes with your created poem? (I think so)
December 27, 2012 at 5:32 pm
Aww many thanks. You are too kind!
I will have to keep thinking hard on that!
Many blessings to you!
December 27, 2012 at 9:57 pm
fresh!
December 28, 2012 at 9:11 am
como perejil!
December 28, 2012 at 6:50 pm
I love the genuine smile which is the real you…so very perfect!!!!
January 2, 2013 at 10:01 am
Lovely. Thank you, wishing you all the best!
December 30, 2012 at 12:28 pm
Love this post! The poem is fantastic! All the best in the new year
January 2, 2013 at 10:02 am
I’m glad!! Thank you, wishing you all the best as well!
January 28, 2013 at 8:07 pm
Hi. I really liked hearing your poem. I especially like the line about the sheep saying the wolves dance for them. You have a natural cadence to your voice and it shows the internal rhythm of the poem. I look forward to seeing your next video. Jane
January 29, 2013 at 10:46 am
Beautifully detailed comment, i thank you! I sometimes hear myself over and over and I notice a natural cadence to my voice as well, even when I try to change it up a bit, depending on the poem. But I guess its my signature cadence! :-p I’m learning to accept it, and you just made it easier. Thank you so much! I’m humbled